Sunday, September 13, 2009

Petals of My Romantic Side

She loves me...
She loves me not...
She loves me...
She loves me not...
She loves me!?!
Apparently more than I can imagine.

Doubt in my mind, and my heart in my throat,
Some things are to good to be true,
While others are...
True because they're to good.

Note: A corny poem, with a corny title, only more proof that the end result of being pressured to write poetry will fail.

2 comments:

  1. Poetry does have it's slow times, but when you allow yourself to flow with it, it can become easier. There are a lot of corny poems out there, I've written some myself. You'll get better!

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  2. You are so damned wrong about your potential to write poetry. This one already demonstrates a great deal of raw poetic poential!

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